I became a stalker who chased after the heroines, only to be cut down by the protagonist.
To survive, I decided to quit.
I’m not the type to stalk someone anyway.
Instead, I decided to enjoy monopolizing the hidden pieces I’d seen in the limited edition art book… but at some point, I started to feel like I was being stalked.
Uh, um… It must be my imagination, right…?
dem booty is very round
God bless this shi (ﾉ≧∇≦)ﾉ ﾐ ┻━┻
Every time it gets me every fxxking time
For those who might be confused on how this is written, I wrote a small summary. I put this in a spoiler just in case, I don’t personally see it that way myself, but others might.
It’s basically a narrative within a narrative within a narrative. There are basically three layers here.
Let’s start with the outer layer. This is where we are with the MC for “I Became the Academy’s Heroine Stalker.” Let’s label MC here as MCAlpha. He is reading a story called “Hidden Piece Academy,” written by an author in his universe (AuthorAlpha). He is then reincarnated as a minor villain in that story which leads to the middle layer.
The middle layer, “Hidden Piece Academy” is a story about another MC reincarnator. Let’s label this MC as MCBeta. MCbeta insulted the author’s work in his universe (AuthorBeta), who then sends MCBeta into the story and makes him the protagonist in “Hidden Piece Academy.” which is leads to the inner layer.
The inner layer is the original story. AuthorBeta’s work. The setting/premise to everything. Due to circumstances, was unable to really finish the story. This caused MCBeta to leave a 5700 word critique which leads to MCBetas transmigation.
So basically, MCAlpha is in MCBeta’s story as a villain. MCAlpha knows MCBeta’s story and character. To us though, he’s the hero of course.
To be fair, I might’ve missed a couple of details, or read something wrong, so take my summary with a grain of salt.
Alternatively, you can say its similar to A Third-Rate Villain’s Sweet Life Exploiting Academy Bugs.
What happened to MCDelta of the original story? Is he still around?
read the first 10 chapters and i am really enjoying it, one of the better ones
First 4 chaps alr giving me a bad impression, but I’ll continue if you say so
I am once more attracted to the thumbnail…. neuron activation.
That thumbnail is enough to convince me to read this.
Lets be real, the only reason why this novel so highly in this site is because of them cheeks. The pacing is slow and the mc is so bland
This aged really badly lmao
now im kinda curious about this novel. I dropped t at like ch 16 when it first came out but ill give it a read
Eh the plot twist isn’t really anything special
Ok someone has to be botting. At least leave a reply why its not mid man.
I’ve read up to chapter 79, and, knowing I will be annoying the good readers here, have to say the story completely fell off the rails with the introduction of Renia/Reina, and in fact the story would have been BETTER without her.
Yes, she is best girl, no question about it. THAT’S the problem.
How It Started:
MC’s body, a hunter at a magic academy, had min-maxed stalking to the point of being expelled from school if MC hadn’t taken it over in time. MC now has a body that is incredibly weak (has a crippling debuff too), has most skill points already used up for stalking, and is now attending school without having studied for anything.
Unknown to the MC though, the stalker victims (aka the hero’s harem) KNEW about the stalking and were actually OKAY with it for the most part. Now that the MC is in control the stalking has obviously stopped and the girls are confused as to why.
Meanwhile, MC has knowledge of “hidden pieces” (various bonuses and skills) that he knows the hero will not be collecting, so figuring that the story needs the hero and the hero needs his harem, MC decides, “Let him go his way and I’ll go mine”.
Unfortunately, the hero’s harem are now paying more attention to the MC than to the hero, which irritates him, so he confronts and tries to bully the MC.
MC decides “Since you’re being a jerk I’m now gonna race you to ALL the hidden pieces. First come, first served, plot be damned!”
How It’s Going Now (spoilers):
MC is now the handsomest, fittest and smartest #1 student at school in ALL areas.
Hero turned to the Dark Side (TM), became evil, and is now DEAD (so much for him, huh?).
Stalker victims (aka hero’s harem) are present, generally have positive feelings towards MC, but he has friendzoned them BECAUSE:
Renia/Reina (new character, not a part of hero’s harem, OP as hell) is BEST GIRL.
Secret Society of Sinister Sociopaths (TM) – you KNEW they were coming – are the new bad guys.
How It Should Have Went:
MC is racing the hero in collecting hidden pieces.
Hero realizes the danger, calls on harem to help. Because he’s the hero, incredible luck favors him.
Harem helps, but are still dealing with their feelings about the whole stalking thing stopping.
Outnumbered MC struggles, showing off his better side and getting the harem’s hearts fluttering.
Hero starts cutting corners, things escalate.
MC and hero fight and chat, and multiple truths are revealed.
Finally, hero dies.
Evil villains go, “Oh hey, THAT was easy!” and leave to do more evil.
MC goes, “Aw, CRAP! Now *I* have to save the world!”
MC now has to collect the rest of the hidden pieces AND the former hero’s harem for a brand new hero party. Because of the thing with the hero, the girls are underleveled and underpowered.
Bonding times with harem. Old and new fetishes are revealed. Audience gets to DECIDE who is Best Girl.
Story moves on to heroic fights and derring do, and all that Good vs Evil stuff.
TLDR;
1. A harem lives and breathes on who is Best Girl. If you’re going to introduce someone ELSE who is the Bestest Of Them All, then WHY BOTHER with a harem in the first place?!
2. A conflict between TWO heroic characters is far more interesting than yet another Secret Society of Sinister Sociopaths (TM).
3. It’s a Good vs Evil story, you don’t NEED a Secret Society of Sinister Sociopaths (TM). Neither Sauron nor Darth Vader were in a union, after all!